Sakura - Gigas

Vision: The facial expressions and body language match the dialogue really well. Well done <img src="e.deviantart.net/emoticons/c/c…" width="20" height="20" alt="" title="Clap"/>

Originality: This kind of scene and the line "I'm not that bad once you get to know me" isn't terribly original I'm afraid, a little over used I think. <img src="e.deviantart.net/emoticons/a/a…" width="19" height="19" alt="" title="Sweating a little..."/> But I am liking the costumes.

Technique: Anatomically you've done an alright job. Especially considering that your characters are sitting Arms and legs are porportioned well and positioned naturally, well done. The guy's neck looks a bit too long however. (Although I don't know the circumstances surrounding the thingy around his neck.)

Straight lines would have improved the look of the wall/fence they're sitting on. Also, take a look at some guides on how to draw hands and feet. It's probably one of the hardest things but pretty necessary. <img src="e.deviantart.net/emoticons/s/s…" width="15" height="15" alt="" title=" (Smile)"/> Also more detail would have been good, I can't tell what it is they're holding.

Impact: The lightly shaded scenery and background denies the image oomph, if you know what I mean. Because the two people are a similar shade to the scenery around them they kind of get absorbed into that, either work on drawing more detailed backgrounds with varying size and lines or make your characters darker.

Keep at it! <img src="e.deviantart.net/emoticons/n/n…" width="15" height="15" alt="" title="Nod"/>